Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the tense and be more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (e.g., “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”), then add one or two supporting details (what kind of bike, who gave it to you, or a short memory). Use linking words if you add details. Keep it natural and within 1–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for my sixth birthday, and I used to ride it around the park every afternoon.

提案: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Use correct subject-verb agreement and smoother linking phrases. Provide specific reasons and a clear result. Avoid filler words like “uh” and fix unclear phrases such as “the view will nowadays are so expensive.” Keep answers to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (e.g., “because,” “so,” “for example”).

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in summer, because many people enjoy outdoor activities. For example, families and groups of friends often cycle to nearby mountains or scenic areas to relax and enjoy nature, since visiting some popular tourist spots has become expensive.

× Yes, I do have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner's question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense, so the response must also use past tense. 'I do have' is present tense and incorrect here. Use 'I did' or 'Yes, I had' to match past time reference. Suggestion: answer with 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yes, bike are popular in my country, especially during summer.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially during summer.

The noun should be plural 'bikes' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Using the singular 'bike' with 'are' creates subject-verb disagreement. Suggestion: use plural subject 'bikes' when referring to the general popularity of bicycles.

× They usually go to the mountain and uh, other areas to explore since the view will nowadays are so expensive.

✓ They usually go to the mountains and other areas to explore, since views nowadays are so expensive.

Multiple issues: 'the mountain' should be plural 'the mountains' when speaking generally; 'view will nowadays are so expensive' is ungrammatical. The phrase 'views nowadays are so expensive' uses present simple 'are' to state a general truth. Remove 'will' and place 'nowadays' before or after 'are' correctly. Also make 'view' plural to match general meaning. Suggestion: 'They usually go to the mountains and other areas to explore, since views nowadays are so expensive.'

× They usually go to the mountain and uh, other areas to explore since the view will nowadays are so expensive.

✓ They usually go to the mountains and other areas to explore, since views nowadays are so expensive.

When talking about going to mountainous regions in general, use the plural 'mountains' and the preposition 'to' is fine, but the rest of the clause is incorrectly constructed. Remove unnecessary 'will' and place 'nowadays' correctly. The corrected sentence uses proper preposition usage and word order. Suggestion: 'They usually go to the mountains and other areas to explore, since views nowadays are so expensive.'