Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant and tells a short story, but it needs clearer structure, smoother phrasing, and more precise vocabulary. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “again again”) and correct minor grammar (use past simple consistently).

例: Yes, I did. At first I couldn’t ride very well, but I practised a lot and gradually improved. After a few weeks of daily practice, I could ride confidently without training wheels.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar and clarity problems. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with a specific reason and a linking word (for example, “because” or “for example”). Use correct tense and singular/plural agreement, and give one concrete detail or comparison.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular. For example, when I was in junior high nearly every student rode a bike to school because it was cheap and convenient.

× At first I couldn't ride a bike well, but I tried to practice again again and finally I got to ride a bike.

✓ At first I couldn't ride a bike well, but I tried practising again and again and finally I managed to ride a bike.

The verb 'practice' after 'tried' should be in the -ing form when expressing an attempt (try + -ing). Also 'got to ride' is awkward here; use 'managed to ride' to show eventual success. Use 'practising' (British) or 'practicing' (American) consistently. Remove duplicated 'again'. Suggestions: use 'tried practising again and again' or 'tried to practice repeatedly', and use 'managed to ride' for clarity.

× Yes, because when it I was a junior high school student, almost junior high school student have to use the bike to go to school.

✓ Yes, because when I was a junior high school student, almost every junior high school student had to use a bike to go to school.

There is an extraneous pronoun 'it' before 'I' which should be removed. 'Almost junior high school student' is ungrammatical: use 'almost every junior high school student' or 'most junior high school students'. Also tense and subject-verb agreement: referring to past habitual action requires past tense 'had to' not present 'have to'. Use singular/plural agreement for 'student(s)' and article 'a bike' or 'bikes' consistently. Suggestions: 'when I was a junior high school student, most students had to ride a bike to school.'