Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and natural, but it's very brief and lacks supporting detail. To improve, add one or two specific details (e.g., what the bike looked like, when you got it, who taught you to ride, or a short memory) and use a linking word if you add more than one sentence. Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents gave me for my sixth birthday, and my older brother taught me how to ride it in the park.

提案: Your response addresses the question but is informal and a bit hesitant. Improve by using a clearer topic sentence and then support it with specific reasons or an example. Use linking words (e.g., however, whereas, for example) to make the contrast clear. Avoid filler phrases like 'I feel like'.

例: It depends on the city: in big urban areas bikes are common for commuting, whereas in rural regions they are less popular. For example, in my city many people cycle to work because there are dedicated bike lanes and convenient bike-share programs.

× I feel like it depends on city to city.

✓ I feel like it depends on city to city. -> I feel like it depends from city to city. -> Better: I feel like it depends from city to city.

The phrase 'city to city' lacks the necessary preposition. The common English pattern is 'from city to city' or 'from one city to another.' Use 'from' to indicate variation between places. Suggestion: say 'I feel like it depends from city to city' or more naturally 'I feel like it depends from one city to another' or 'I feel like it depends on the city.'

× In my city it's quite popular, yes.

✓ In my city it's quite popular, yes. -> In my city it's quite popular, yes. -> Better: In my city, it's quite popular.

The original is mostly correct but would benefit from punctuation and placement of the article is fine. The issue flagged is minor: include a comma after the introductory phrase 'In my city' for clarity and naturalness. Also avoid the trailing 'yes' which is unnecessary in this context. Suggestion: 'In my city, it's quite popular.'