Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте простые и грамматически правильные конструкции прошедшего времени. В этом ответе смешаны времена и неверный порядок слов. Начните с прямого предложения (например, "No, I didn't") и при необходимости добавьте одно-два предложения с пояснением о причинах или альтернативе, используя связки (because, so, because of). Следите за отрицательной формой в Past Simple: "didn't have".

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my parents preferred to drive me or use public transport.

提案: Сократите заполнители (ум, эээ) и постройте ответ логично: тема → причина → пример. Используйте подходящие лексические единицы (bicycles/bikes, public transport, cars, buses) и связывающие слова (because, therefore, for example). Дайте конкретную деталь или пример, чтобы поддержать мысль, и не превышайте 3–4 предложений.

例: In my opinion, bikes are not very popular in my country because the roads and infrastructure are more suited to cars and buses. For example, most families own at least one car, so people rarely choose cycling for daily travel.

× No, I have. I hadn't a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student mixed present perfect 'I have' and past perfect/negative 'I hadn't a bike' incorrectly. The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so use simple past. In negative simple past for 'have' use 'did not have' (or 'didn't have'), not 'hadn't' which is past perfect negative and not followed by 'a' in this structure. Suggestion: Use 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× So in my opinion, uh, the bikes are not popular in my country because, umm, our people don't use, uh, these, uh, machine too much.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are not popular in my country because people don't use these machines very much.

Issues: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'bikes' when speaking generally (use plural without article), subject phrasing 'our people' is unnatural (use 'people' or 'many people'), incorrect singular 'machine' with demonstrative 'these' (plural needed), and adverb placement 'too much' is awkward after verb — 'very much' is more natural. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: Say 'In my opinion, bikes are not popular in my country because people don't use these machines very much.'

× Uh, we usually use only a buses or cars or we have.

✓ We usually only use buses or cars.

Errors: 'a buses' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'buses' (article should match number), redundant 'or we have' is unnecessary. Word order: place 'only' before the verb or object for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'We usually only use buses or cars.'