Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, thì đúng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (dùng thì quá khứ: "I had"), tránh tiếng ums/uhs, và dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi bổ sung chi tiết nếu cần. Ví dụ nêu thêm ai tặng/ mua cho, màu sắc hoặc kỷ niệm ngắn sẽ làm câu phong phú hơn. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, liên kết mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was six; it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I remember riding it in the park near our house every weekend.

提案: Cần cải thiện phát âm/ lựa chọn từ và cấu trúc câu. Sửa từ vựng sai ("bites" → "bikes", "transportation" → "means of transport"), thì và ngữ pháp ("I used to use it to go to school"). Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi bổ sung các chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tỉ lệ sử dụng, lý do phổ biến, ai hay đi xe đạp). Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example" để liên kết ý.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and workers cycle to school or work every day. In my family, several members know how to ride a bicycle and use it for short trips.

× 'Yes, I have, umm, the first buy I have when I, uh, was six years old.'

✓ 'Yes, I did. The first bike I bought was when I was six years old.'

'Student used incorrect articles and verb forms: "I have" is wrong for past possession in this context; "the first buy I have" is ungrammatical and uses the noun buy incorrectly instead of the verb buy in past tense. Correct form uses past simple: "I did" to answer the question and "the first bike I bought was...". Suggestion: use past simple for past events, use correct noun "bike" instead of "buy", and place articles appropriately ("the first bike").'

× 'I think bites is one of the most transportation in my country.'

✓ 'I think bikes are one of the most common forms of transportation in my country.'

'Errors: "bites" is a misspelling of "bikes" and subject-verb number agreement was wrong because a plural subject needs a plural verb ("bikes are"). Also phrase "one of the most transportation" is incorrect: use "one of the most common forms of transportation". Suggestion: correct spelling, match plural subject with "are", and use appropriate noun phrase for countability ("forms of transportation").'

× 'I used to use by to go to school and evenly my family.'

✓ 'I used to use bikes to go to school and to visit my family.'

'Errors: word choice and sentence structure are incorrect. "use by" is wrong; should be "use bikes". "evenly my family" is incorrect word choice; likely meant "visit my family" or "see my family". Suggestion: keep parallel structure with "to" + verb and choose correct verbs: "use bikes to go to school and to visit my family."'

× 'My own member of my family know how to buy the bicycle.'

✓ 'My family members all know how to ride a bicycle.'

'Errors: "My own member of my family" is an incorrect and awkward pronoun/possessive structure. "Member" should be plural if referring to more than one, and verb agreement "know" must match plural subject. Also context likely about riding, not buying. Suggestion: use "my family members" and plural verb and correct verb "ride" if intended; if meant "buy" then say "buy a bicycle". Example: "My family members all know how to ride a bicycle."' }]}