Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand your answer to be a full, natural response. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., when you got it, who gave it to you, where you used it). Use linking words for coherence and keep to no more than 4–5 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven — it was a red bicycle my parents bought me for my birthday. I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon, and learning to cycle felt like a big milestone for me.

提案: Give a fuller opinion with specific reasons or examples. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your view, then support it with 1–2 reasons (e.g., traffic, cost, culture) using linking words such as "because" or "for example". Avoid short fragments and aim for a natural conversational tone.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap to run and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work or to the market in the morning, and cities have been adding bike lanes to encourage more people to ride.

× Yeah, so popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

The original reply is a fragment lacking a verb and subject, which makes it incomplete (Sentence structure error, ID 26). It also fails to match the examiner's question asking about bikes in general, which requires a full clause and correct subject-verb agreement. Correction provides the subject 'they' (referring to bikes) and the verb 'are' to form a complete present-tense sentence appropriate to the question. Suggestion: always include subject and verb in responses (e.g., 'Yes, they are very popular' or 'Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country').