Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ краток и содержит грамматическую ошибку: для прошедшего времени следует использовать Past Simple (I didn't have). Также ответ не раскрывает тему — нужно дать прямое утверждение и одну-две дополнительные детали, используя связку (например, because / but) и не более 5 предложений.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a very small apartment and there wasn’t space to store one. However, I sometimes rode my friend’s bike in the neighborhood.

提案: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические и стилистические ошибки (повторение, порядок слов). Следует начать с ясного тематического предложения, затем добавить одно-два конкретных примера или статистику, используя связки (for example, because, so). Держите не более 4 предложений и используйте подходящую лексику (cyclists, cycling paths).

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many cities have well-maintained parks and cycling paths. For example, on weekends dozens of families and commuters ride bikes in the parks, so cycling is both a leisure activity and a convenient way to travel.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked about having a bike when you were a child (a completed situation in the past). The present perfect 'I haven't' is inappropriate; use the past simple negative 'I didn't' to refer to a past habit or situation. Suggestion: use past simple for finished past events (e.g., 'I didn't').

× Yes, I think that because we in our country, we have a lot of parks and there a lot of people ride a bike in these parks.

✓ Yes, I think so because in our country we have a lot of parks and many people ride bikes in them.

This sentence has several issues: awkward structure ('I think that because we in our country' is incorrect), incorrect word order, missing verb in one clause ('there a lot of people' lacks 'are'), incorrect article/number ('a lot of people ride a bike' should be plural 'ride bikes'), and pronoun reference ('in these parks' can be simplified to 'in them'). Suggestions: 1) Use 'I think so' or 'I think that' followed by a clear clause. 2) Place 'in our country' before or after subject with correct commas: 'in our country we have...'. 3) Use 'there are a lot of people' if using 'there' construction. 4) Use plural nouns when speaking generally: 'people ride bikes'. 5) Keep pronouns consistent: 'in them' refers back to parks.