Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and clear, but it is too short and misses opportunity to add brief supporting detail. To improve, give one or two concise reasons or a short contrast (e.g., family reasons, safety, or sharing with siblings). Keep it natural and avoid fillers like 'uh'. Use one linking word if you add a detail (for example 'because' or 'but').

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride to the park.

提案: Good content and relevance, but reduce hesitations and improve wording. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and a linking word. Replace vague phrases ('working persons') with natural expressions ('commuters' or 'workers') and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many commuters use them to travel to work. For example, in cities with heavy traffic, cycling is faster and cheaper than driving.

× because most of the working persons uh, use bike as their transport to go to their offices.

✓ because most working people use bikes as their transport to get to their offices.

The original sentence has singular/plural and word-choice issues: 'persons' is unnatural here; 'people' is correct. 'Working persons' should be 'working people'. 'Use bike' mixes plural subject with singular noun; it should be 'use bikes' (plural) or 'use a bike' (singular). Also 'to go to' is wordy; 'to get to' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'most working people use bikes to get to their offices.' Note: Only corrections that match the provided Grammar_Problem_Type_List were made.