Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response does not answer the question at all and appears to be a technical check. For this question you should give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, how often you used it, or a memorable moment). Keep it natural, concise and use linking words if you add details.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday and rode it to school most days. Because it had a bright red frame and a bell, everyone in the neighborhood recognized me.

提案: You did not provide any answer to this question. To score well, respond directly with an opinion (yes or no), then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, however, because) to make your answer coherent and keep your response to no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, bike lanes in cities are often busy during rush hour, and local governments promote cycling by organizing community rides.

× Hello, do you hear me?

✓ Hello, can you hear me?

The original sentence uses 'do you hear me?' which is grammatically possible but sounds odd in this context where the student is checking connection; using the modal 'can' is more appropriate for asking about ability to hear in the moment. According to the provided list, the closest match is 'Sentence without a verb' (ID 23) because the greeting 'Hello' is not a complete sentence by itself and the following check is better formed with a modal verb. Suggestion: combine the greeting and the connection check as 'Hello, can you hear me?' to make a natural, grammatically correct utterance.