Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1-2 câu bổ sung với thông tin cụ thể (ví dụ: loại xe, ai tặng, tần suất sử dụng, kỷ niệm). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý nếu cần. Giữ tổng số câu dưới hoặc bằng 5.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents gave me for my eighth birthday. I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood with my friends, and I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và chứa lỗi ngôn ngữ/phi logic. Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, đưa ra lý do cụ thể và ví dụ. Sử dụng liên từ (for example, because, so) để làm rõ lập luận. Tránh từ ngẫu nhiên không liên quan.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in big cities you can see commuters riding bikes to work, and in rural areas children often use bicycles to go to school.

× Yes, I think buy Apple Pulao in some country in my country too.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in some parts of my country too.

The student used incorrect words and word order; 'buy Apple Pulao' is unrelated and seems to be a lexical error. Also the pronoun/reference and noun were wrong. Corrected sentence uses 'bicycles' to match the question about bikes and 'in some parts of my country' to convey location. Suggestion: use the correct noun (bicycles) and a proper prepositional phrase for location ('in some parts of my country too'), and keep subject-verb agreement ('bicycles are').