Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答を簡潔で文法的に正しい文に直し、主語・時制・冠詞を正確に使うように注意してください。具体的には「過去の習慣や出来事」について話す際は過去形を一貫して使い、不要な語や繰り返しを避けてください。また理由を述べるときは because や so を使って因果関係をはっきりさせ、文を2〜3文にまとめて情報を整理しましょう。発音や流暢さの改善には短く明瞭な文を繰り返し練習することが有効です。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I wanted one, but my parents were too strict and didn’t allow me to have it, so I never got one.

提案: 前置きや繰り返し（wait a moment, I I, our our）を減らし、明確な主張と理由を一貫した形式で述べてください。質問には直接「Yes/No」で答え、続けて because などで理由を説明すると論理的になります。具体例（交通量の多さ、インフラの不足、安全面）を一つか二つ挙げて内容を具体化しましょう。語彙は simple で構わないので正確な語形（crowded roads, infrastructure）を使ってください。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. The roads near my home are usually very crowded, and there isn’t enough cycling infrastructure, so many people prefer cars or motorcycles.

× I didn't have a bike when I was charged my I wanted the one but my parents was too strict to give me a bike so I can't get it.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wanted one, but my parents were too strict to give me a bike, so I couldn't get it.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and verb-tense problems. 'was charged my' is nonsensical and should be 'was a child' (sentence structure). 'I wanted the one' should be 'I wanted one' (article and phrasing). 'my parents was' is a subject-verb agreement error; 'parents' is plural so use 'were'. 'so I can't get it' mixes present tense with past context; the correct past tense is 'couldn't get it'. Suggestion: split into clear sentences, use past tense consistently for past events, ensure plural subjects take plural verbs, and use simple nouns/phrases (e.g., 'a child', 'one').

× I think, wait a moment please.

✓ I think, wait a moment, please.

This is mainly punctuation/fluency rather than a grammatical tense error. In spoken English it's fine to say 'I think, wait a moment, please' when asking for a pause. Suggestion: include commas for natural pauses; no tense change needed.

× I I think a bike is not popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country.

Using 'a bike is not popular' suggests a single bike rather than bikes in general. To talk about general popularity, use plural 'bikes are' or the uncountable phrase 'cycling is not popular'. Also remove the duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: use plural noun and matching verb for general statements ('bikes are').

× In my sense, our our country's road around my house is too crowded.

✓ In my view, the roads around my house are too crowded.

'In my sense' is unnatural; 'in my view' or 'I think' is better. 'our our country's road' repeats 'our' and uses singular 'road' for multiple roads; use 'the roads around my house' and plural verb 'are'. Also 'my country's' is unnecessary if referring to local roads. Suggestion: use natural expressions ('in my view'), avoid repetition, and make noun number agree with verb.