Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，未作任何回答。按评分规则，应直接给出主句并必要时补充细节。改进要点：1) 直接回答问题（肯定或否定）。2) 给出1–2个支持细节（例如年龄、谁送的、骑车的频率或记忆）。3) 使用连接词使句子连贯（例如：when, because, so）。请用不超过5句的自然表达。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, a small red one my parents bought for my birthday. I rode it almost every day after school with my friends, which helped me become more confident and independent.

提案: 你的回答仍然只是重复问题，未提供观点或支持细节。改进要点：1) 直接表达观点（肯定或否定）。2) 提供具体理由或例子（如通勤、休闲、城市政策、自行车道增多等）。3) 使用连接词连接观点与细节（例如：because, for example, however）。保持句子自然且不冗长。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have built more bike lanes and public bike-sharing programs, so cycling has become more convenient and widespread.

× Do you think bike are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

原句中名词“bike”与动词“are”不一致：使用了复数动词“are”，但名词用的是单数形式“bike”。正确做法是名词与动词在人称和数上保持一致。把“bike”改为复数“bikes”即可。建议：注意主语的单复数形式，动词也要相应变化；遇到主语为复数时用复数动词（are），主语为单数时用单数动词（is）。