Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã trả lời bằng câu hỏi thay vì trả lời trực tiếp; có lỗi phát âm/viết ("buy" thay vì "bike") và thiếu nội dung. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề, rồi thêm 1-2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ (tuổi, tần suất dùng, cảm giác). Dùng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about six and used it almost every day to ride around my neighborhood. Riding my bike helped me feel independent and active.

提案: Bạn lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì trả lời; thiếu ý kiến và chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề nêu quan điểm rõ ràng, sau đó dùng 1-2 câu để giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (thành phố/nông thôn, dùng để đi làm/giải trí). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, therefore).

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas and among students. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or school because they are cheap and convenient, although cars are more common in big cities.

× Did you have a buy when you were a 2?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were 2?

The word 'buy' is a verb meaning 'to purchase' and is incorrect here; the student intended the noun 'bike'. Also 'a 2' is incorrect; ages are expressed without the article: 'when you were 2' or 'when you were two'. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'bike' and remove the article before an age (or spell out the number): 'when you were 2' or 'when you were two'.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is already grammatically correct. It matches the present simple question structure for general opinions. No correction needed.