Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and directly answer the question with correct tense and age reference. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), correct grammar for age, and add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid confusing or irrelevant phrases.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about 7 years old, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because the area was small and safe, I grew more confident riding on my own.

提案: Give a clear, grammatically correct opinion and support it with specific reasons and linking words. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer phrases (e.g., "because of traffic congestion"), and avoid vague or awkward expressions like "all men's are loving bikes."

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to avoid heavy traffic and save money on fuel, and especially in cities bicycles are common for short trips and commuting.

× Do you have a bike friend you have outside? Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child? Yes, I had a bike.

The student used present tense and confusing pronouns in response to a past-tense question. The examiner asked 'Did you have...' so the student should reply in past tense and refer clearly to themselves. Change 'Do you have' to 'Did you have' and 'Yes, I have a bike' to 'Yes, I had a bike' to match past context and remove the unclear phrase 'friend you have outside'. Also remove extra clause that does not make sense.

× When I was a child, at 17 year old, I had a bike.

✓ When I was 17 years old, I had a bike.

The phrase 'at 17 year old' is grammatically incorrect. Use 'When I was 17 years old' or 'At 17' to indicate age in the past. The sentence should remain in past tense 'had' to match 'When I was'. Also use the plural form 'years' with the numeral.

× Many people uses bikes because the traffic issue and all men's are loving bikes either car.

✓ Many people use bikes because of traffic problems, and many men love bikes as well as cars.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Many people' is plural so the verb should be 'use', not 'uses'. Incorrect preposition and noun forms: say 'because of traffic problems' rather than 'because the traffic issue'. 'All men's are loving bikes either car' is ungrammatical: 'men' is the plural noun, not 'men's', 'love' is the correct verb form (not 'are loving' for general truth), and 'either' is misused. 'Many men love bikes as well as cars' is a clear, grammatical alternative.