Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сформулируйте ответ ясно и грамматически правильно. Начните с прямого утверждения в прошедшем времени, затем при необходимости добавьте одно-два поясняющих предложения. Избегайте колебаний («uh», «no, yes») и не меняйте времена. Можно сказать, где вы ехали на велосипеде и с кем, чтобы дать конкретную деталь.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to the park with my older brother every weekend.

提案: Говорите более связно и избегайте повторов и ошибок произношения. Используйте связующие слова (for example, because, so) и приведите конкретные причины или примеры. Упражняйтесь в правильном употреблении глаголов и словосочетаний, чтобы фразы звучали естественно.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting, especially in cities. For example, during rush hour you can see lots of cyclists on dedicated bike lanes.

× Uh, yes I have. No, yes I did.

✓ Uh, yes, I did.

Student used present perfect 'have' with a past time reference 'when you were a child'. In English, past simple 'did' is appropriate. Also the reply was hesitating and included both forms; produce a single clear past-form answer. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I did.' for a simple past statement about childhood experiences.

× Yeah, I think so, because so many people in rights right in the bikes and many of them ride in the the same, the same. Marks.

✓ Yeah, I think so, because so many people ride bikes, and many of them ride in the same places.

Original contains incorrect prepositions and words: 'in rights right in the bikes' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'ride bikes'. Repeated fragments 'the the same, the same. Marks' are unclear; likely meant 'the same places' or 'the same streets'. Correction simplifies to 'ride bikes' and 'the same places'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions and repeated words, use 'ride' + object 'bikes' and specify 'places' or 'streets' to complete the idea.