Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer did not respond to the examiner's question and contains grammatical errors. First, answer directly (Yes/No) with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike. Then add 1–2 specific supporting details (age, who bought it, how often you rode it) using linking words like “when” or “because.” Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it from my parents when I was eight, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every weekend. Because it was a lightweight, bright red bike, I felt confident riding it on small hills.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains vocabulary/grammar mistakes. Begin with a direct opinion (Yes/No and degree: very/somewhat) and then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “however” to structure your response. Keep sentences short and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in larger cities there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling more convenient and common.

× Do you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the wrong pronoun and noun: 'Do you have' is present tense and addresses current possession, and 'a bag' does not match the examiner's question about a bike. The correct form for asking about past possession is 'Did you have' (past simple). Suggestion: Use past simple 'Did you have' for past events and repeat the noun from the question ('bike') to answer appropriately.

× Yeah, I think back is reported in our country.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in our country.

The student used incorrect words and tense: 'back is reported' is ungrammatical and does not express the intended meaning. The examiner asked about popularity (present), so present simple should be used. 'Bikes are popular' is the correct present-tense passive-like description. Suggestion: Use 'bikes are popular' or 'bicycles are popular' to clearly state general facts in present simple.