Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Develop a full, natural response by adding a topic sentence and specific supporting details (e.g., age, how you used it, memories). Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it every day after school to visit friends and the park. Because the roads near my home were quiet, I learned to cycle confidently within a few months. Those rides helped me become more independent and taught me a lot about balance and confidence.

提案: Give a clear opinion with reasons and specific examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and a wider range of vocabulary to explain popularity (e.g., commuting, recreation, environmental reasons). Limit to up to five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and leisure. For example, in cities there are dedicated cycle lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so commuting by bike is convenient and affordable. Additionally, with growing concern about pollution and traffic, more families choose cycling for health and environmental benefits.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The response 'Yes.' is a short affirmative but lacks an explicit verb and does not fully answer the past tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. This is a sentence without a verb (type ID 23). Provide a full sentence using the auxiliary verb 'did' to match the past simple question: 'Yes, I did.' This makes the response complete and grammatically clear.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The response 'Yes.' to 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' is a one-word reply without a verb and can sound abrupt. This falls under sentence without a verb (type ID 23). A more complete and natural answer is 'Yes, I think so.' which supplies the verb 'think' and matches the present simple question form. Alternatively, use 'Yes, they are' to explicitly repeat the subject and verb: 'Yes, they are.'