Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Pronunciation and clarity: you misheard and repeated the examiner's question, and you misspelled/pronounced “bike” as “buy”. Focus on listening carefully and answering directly. Begin with a clear topic sentence that states whether you had a bike, then add 1–2 short supporting details using linking words (e.g., “Yes, I did. ... because ...” or “No, I didn’t. However, ...”). Keep answers natural and within about 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to school on weekends. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride quickly and spent a lot of time outdoors.

提案: Comprehension and grammar: you repeated and distorted the examiner’s question instead of answering. Make sure you understand the question first; then answer directly with a topic sentence stating your view. Use linking words (e.g., “Because”, “However”, “For example”) and give one specific reason or example to support your opinion. Keep sentences clear and grammatically correct.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. For example, many people use electric bicycles to commute short distances because they are cheaper and faster than public transport for short trips.

× Did you have a buy when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

ID 26 and 12: The student used the word 'buy' (a verb) instead of the noun 'bike'. This is a word choice/word form error causing the sentence to be ungrammatical and change meaning. Also there is no pronoun error but the structure becomes incorrect because of the wrong word. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'bike' to answer the examiner's question; listen for minimal pairs and similar sounding words and check that the word fits grammatically in the sentence context.

× Do you think buys a pupil popular in your countries?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

ID 26 and 1: Multiple mistakes present. The student wrote 'buys' (incorrect word form and placement) instead of 'bikes' (plural noun), used 'a pupil' (nonsensical insertion), used 'popular' without the linking verb, and used 'countries' (plural) while context expects singular 'your country'. Correct structure: 'Do you think + subject (bikes) + linking verb (are) + adjective (popular) + in your country?' Suggestion: Keep subject-verb order: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Ensure correct noun form (bike -> bikes) and use singular 'your country' unless referring to multiple countries.