Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the examiner's question directly and briefly. The student misunderstood the question and replied with a question about a different word. For improvement: listen carefully, paraphrase the question if unsure, and respond with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., 'Yes,...', 'Because...', 'For example...'). Keep the whole answer to no more than 4–5 short sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I used it every weekend to ride around my neighborhood. Because it was lightweight, I learned to ride it quickly. For example, I remember practicing on the park path until I could go without help.

提案: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., 'graphics' is wrong here). Use precise vocabulary such as 'short distances' and 'traffic'. Keep answers natural and concise (max 4–5 sentences).

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient for short distances and help avoid traffic. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to run quick errands in the city. In addition, cycling is cheap and environmentally friendly, so more people choose it over driving.

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/content error. The examiner asked about having a bike; the correct answer should be a past-tense statement. Use past simple 'had' to match 'when you were a child' and provide the expected information. Suggestion: answer briefly and directly, e.g. 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, bikes are popular because it is very convenient when you use in a short in a short distance as well as if you want to avoid graphics.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular because they are very convenient for short distances and useful if you want to avoid traffic.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun reference and agreement ('it' should be 'they' to refer to plural 'bikes'), incorrect preposition and phrasing ('use in a short in a short distance' is ungrammatical), and wrong word 'graphics' instead of 'traffic'. These are sentence structure and word choice errors. Corrections: use plural pronoun 'they', 'convenient for short distances' is the natural phrase, and 'avoid traffic' expresses the intended meaning. Suggestion: keep subject-pronoun agreement and use common collocations (convenient for short distances, avoid traffic).