Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần trực tiếp và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát biểu lạc đề (ví dụ: “when was the trial?” không phù hợp). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + brief detail), sau đó nếu cần bổ sung 1–2 câu chi tiết về loại xe, ai tặng, hoặc kỷ niệm liên quan. Giữ dưới 5 câu và dùng liên từ đơn giản nếu thêm thông tin.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me. I used to ride it to the park every weekend and learned to ride without training wheels within a month.

提案: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, tránh ồn ào (filler sounds) và sửa ngữ pháp (thì, động từ, danh từ số nhiều). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề, rồi nêu lý do cụ thể và có thể so sánh quá khứ-hiện tại với liên từ (for example, however). Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., bicycles, motorcycles, cars, urbanization). Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, they used to be very popular, but less so now. As the country has modernized, many people prefer motorcycles and cars for faster travel. For example, in cities most commuters choose scooters or cars because they are quicker and more convenient.

× Of course, when was the trial? I have a bike with two wheels.

✓ Of course, when I was a child? I had a bike with two wheels.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses 'have' for a past possession. Use 'was' to refer to childhood time and past simple 'had' for possession in the past. Also 'when was the trial?' is incorrect in context; likely meant 'when I was a child?'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'Of course. When I was a child, I had a bike with two wheels.'

× MMM. I think in the past, uh, bike is uh, very popular in my country, but now, uh, my country is very developed and umm, it's have more, it has more motorbikes and car than bikes.

✓ I think in the past, bikes were very popular in my country, but now my country is very developed and it has more motorbikes and cars than bikes.

Multiple tense and agreement problems: 'in the past' requires past tense 'were' for 'bikes' (plural). 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes'. 'It's have' is incorrect; use 'it has'. 'Car' should be plural 'cars' to match 'motorbikes and cars'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense: use past tense for past time expressions and plural nouns when referring to multiple items.