Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve açık olmalı; kısa cümle yetmezse bağlaçlarla desteklenmiş 2-3 cümle kullanın. Örneğin, neden bisiklete sahip olduğunuzu, kim verdiğini veya bisikletle neler yaptığınızı belirterek detay ekleyin. Ayrıca “this is perfect” ifadesi bağlam dışı ve belirsiz; bunun yerine duygunuzu veya deneyiminizi açıklayın.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood. Because of that bike I learned to be independent and spent a lot of time playing outdoors with my friends.

提案: Cevap eksik ve dilbilgisi hatalı; doğrudan görüşünüzü söyleyin ve bunu sebepleri veya karşılaştırmalarla destekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cevabın mantığını güçlendirin ve daha uygun kelime seçimi yapın (ör. "not very popular" veya "less popular than cars").

例: I don't think they are very popular. In my country most people prefer cars or motorbikes for convenience and speed, although bicycles are gaining popularity in some cities because of bike lanes and health awareness.

× Yes, I did, because this is perfect.

✓ Yes, I did. It was perfect for me.

The original sentence mixes past tense answer with a present-tense clause and an unclear adjective 'perfect'. The response to 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' should use past tense consistently. Splitting into two sentences clarifies meaning: 'Yes, I did.' answers the question, and 'It was perfect for me.' explains why in the past. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent and use a clear subject ('it') referring to 'a bike'.

× I think not popular.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular.

The original sentence is missing auxiliary verbs and proper word order. In present simple negative opinions, use 'I don't think' + clause. 'Not popular' cannot stand alone after 'I think'. The corrected sentence uses the auxiliary 'do' for negation and places the adjective 'popular' after the verb 'are'. Suggestion: use 'I don't think' or 'I think' with a full clause (subject + verb + complement) when stating opinions.