Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Umm yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. Well it was when I was 6th grade my dad bought me a bike, bought me a bike and uh, I went to school every day with my bike and I love it so much.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yes, in Vietnam like a very ubiquitous amongst the people, many age can use it, including me. I am a student and I bike to school every day. I also see many grandpas and grandmas use bikes as a exercise for them.
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総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 72.0提案: Cải thiện độ rõ ràng và mạch lạc: Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh tiếng ằn ừ (umm, uh) và lặp từ. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại xe, nơi bạn đi, cảm xúc) và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g., because, so, and). Giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu.
例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me in sixth grade, and I rode it to school every day. It was a red mountain bike, which I loved because it was sturdy and fast. I have fond memories of racing my friends on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và lựa chọn từ: Tránh cấu trúc không chính xác (e.g., "like a very ubiquitous"), dùng cấu trúc đơn giản và rõ ràng. Nên nêu ý chính rồi bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ (for example, also) và chỉnh ngữ pháp (many ages, as exercise). Giữ câu ngắn, súc tích và chính xác.
例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Vietnam. Many people of all ages use them; for example, I bike to school every day, and I often see elderly people cycling for exercise. Bikes are common because they are cheap, convenient, and good for short trips.
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