Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a more detailed, natural response. Start with a topic sentence answering directly, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (what kind of bike, how old you were, a memory or frequency of use). Use linking words like “and” or “so” to connect ideas. Keep to under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I used to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood. It was a really happy time because my father taught me to balance and we often raced to the park together.

提案: Expand your answer with a clear opinion and at least one specific reason or example. Begin with a topic sentence stating your view, then add supporting detail using linking words such as “because” or “for example.” Aim for 2–3 sentences and use vocabulary relevant to transport or culture.

例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise, especially in cities with bike lanes. For example, in my city you can see commuters cycling to work in the morning and families riding together on weekends.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past simple yes/no question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' In English, short answers to 'did' use the auxiliary 'did' + subject, not the main verb. Saying 'Yes, I had' is not standard for this question because the correct short form is 'Yes, I did.' Use 'Yes, I did' for confirmation; if you want to give more detail, follow with the main verb: 'Yes, I did. I had a red bike.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' A plain 'Yes, I do' is grammatically possible but sounds less natural because the question asks for an opinion. A more appropriate response is 'Yes, I think so' or 'Yes, they are.' This matches the present-tense opinion question and provides a complete, natural answer. If keeping a short answer with the auxiliary, 'Yes, I do' is acceptable, but 'Yes, they are' directly references 'bikes' and is clearer. Grammar problem type ID:6