Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите заполнители (например, "mmm") и исправьте ошибки. Начните с прямого предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 поддерживающих детали. Используйте связку и конкретику: кто подарил велосипед, где вы катались и как часто. Избегайте нелепых словосочетаний ("eat to ride").

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my tenth birthday, and I rode it almost every day around our neighborhood. I especially enjoyed riding with my friends to the small park nearby.

提案: Уберите междометия ("uh", "umm") и говорите более уверенно. Дайте одно главное утверждение и 1–2 конкретных объяснения с примером места и причины популярности (например, спорт, транспорт, парки). Используйте связующие слова для связности.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people cycle in parks and along bike lanes for exercise and commuting, especially on weekends when families and students go out to relax.

× MMM. Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me and I used to eat to ride the friends.

✓ MMM. Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me and I used to ride it with my friends.

The original sentence contains a lexical error 'eat to ride' which should be 'used to ride'. Also 'ride the friends' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'ride it with my friends'. These are past habitual actions, so use 'used to' + base verb. Suggestion: say 'I used to ride it with my friends' to express repeated past activity.

× Uh, yes, bikes are popular in my country. Uh, I uh, saw uh, many people ride, uh umm, on bicycle in uh, the garden in the park.

✓ Uh, yes, bikes are popular in my country. Uh, I have seen many people riding bicycles in the park.

The original mixes past simple 'saw' with a general observation; use present perfect 'have seen' for experiences up to now or keep simple present for general facts. Also 'ride on bicycle' is ungrammatical: use 'riding bicycles' or 'riding a bicycle'. 'In the garden in the park' is redundant; simply 'in the park' is natural. Suggestion: use 'I have seen many people riding bicycles in the park' for a recent general observation.