Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The response is unclear and unnatural. Give a direct answer (Yes/No) and a brief supporting detail in 1–2 sentences. Avoid irrelevant words and tense errors; use past tense for childhood. Use linking words if adding details.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one and we lived far from friends, so I usually walked to school instead.

提案: The idea is clear but the answer has grammar and phrasing issues and is a bit repetitive. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Use plural/singular agreement and varied vocabulary.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short commutes. For example, many office workers and students ride bicycles to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Agreed. Misconduct. No, I don't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked a past-tense question 'Did you have...?', so the student must use past tense. 'No, I don't.' is present tense and mismatches the question. Also 'Agreed. Misconduct.' are irrelevant fragments and ungrammatical in this context; they should be removed. Use 'No, I didn't.' to correctly negate a past possession. Suggestion: Listen to the question tense (did) and reply using the same past tense auxiliary (did). Avoid adding unrelated single-word fragments.

× Yes, it is a very popular in our country because it helps them to transport in other places and it's easy for them to go to their work.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in our country because bicycles help people travel to other places and it's easy for them to get to work.

Multiple issues: 'it is a very popular' uses singular 'it' with plural concept 'bikes' and the unnecessary article 'a'; correct is plural 'they are' or 'bicycles are'. 'It helps them to transport' is incorrect verb and pronoun use; 'help people travel' is natural. 'Go to their work' is better as 'get to work'. Pronoun consistency: use 'people' or 'they' rather than 'them' as subject. Suggestion: Match pronouns to the noun (bikes → they), use natural verbs for movement (travel/get to), and remove unnecessary articles.

× It is very essential for the everyday life of people.

✓ They are essential to people's everyday lives.

The original uses singular 'It' while referring to bikes (plural), and the phrase 'the everyday life of people' is awkward. Use plural agreement 'They are' and the idiomatic 'people's everyday lives'. Also 'very essential' is redundant; 'essential' suffices but 'very essential' can be kept if emphasis is needed. Suggestion: Keep subject-pronoun agreement (bikes → they) and use idiomatic possessive form 'people's everyday lives'.