Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question and gave no personal answer. Give a direct statement about your own experience (topic sentence), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise, maximum 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, which I rode to visit my friends after school. Because it was light and easy to handle, I quickly learned to balance and stopped using the training wheels by age seven.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is too general and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details (who uses bikes, where, or why) and use linking words for coherence. Use correct determiners and plural forms, and vary vocabulary (e.g., cyclists, commute, recreational). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are cheap and avoid traffic. For example, on weekdays you can see bicycle lanes full of commuters in the morning.

× Normally every people ride the bikes in my country.

✓ Normally everyone rides bicycles in my country.

The phrase 'every people' is incorrect: 'every' must be followed by a singular noun (e.g., 'every person') or use 'everyone'. 'People' is plural and cannot follow 'every'. Additionally, subject-verb agreement: a singular subject ('everyone') requires the singular verb 'rides'. 'The bikes' implies specific bikes; use 'bicycles' (no article) for general statements. Suggestion: replace 'every people' with 'everyone' and use 'rides' and 'bicycles' for a natural, grammatically correct sentence.'