Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết hỗ trợ; phát âm có vẻ đúng nhưng câu không tự nhiên (nên dùng "I didn't" với đối tượng rõ ràng). Cần mở rộng câu chủ đề và thêm 1-2 câu lý do hoặc mô tả ngắn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Hạn chế: không quá 5 câu; dùng liên từ nếu thêm chi tiết.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school with friends. Occasionally I rode my cousin’s bike on weekends, which I really enjoyed.

提案: Trả lời có nội dung nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm từ 'bikes' viết sai thành 'bites', câu thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và liên kết. Cần một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi thêm 1-2 câu hỗ trợ với lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: tiện lợi, tiết kiệm chi phí, giao thông). Sử dụng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để kết nối ý và sửa ngữ pháp (people ride/drive bikes; it is convenient for commuting).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them because they are cheap and convenient for commuting short distances. For example, I see commuters riding bikes to work every morning, especially in crowded urban areas.

× No, I didn't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The student used a full verb phrase 'have' unnecessarily after the auxiliary 'didn't'. In past simple negative questions and answers, use the auxiliary alone: 'Did you have ...? No, I didn't.' Suggestion: Omit the main verb after 'didn't' when the meaning is clear from context.

× I think bites are popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student wrote 'bites', which is a spelling mistake and a different word. The intended noun is 'bikes'. Suggestion: Pay attention to spelling and phonetics; 'bike' refers to bicycle or motorcycle.

× Every day I see many people drive by everywhere by its very convenient for working so many people.

✓ Every day I see many people riding bikes everywhere because they are very convenient for commuting to work.

This sentence has multiple structure and grammar issues: incorrect verb form ('drive' should match 'people' and context—'riding' for bikes), redundant 'by everywhere', wrong pronoun 'its' and unclear phrase 'for working so many people'. Also word choice: 'commuting to work' is clearer. Suggestion: Break ideas into coherent clauses: subject + verb + reason clause with 'because' and ensure verb forms and pronouns agree with the noun they refer to.