Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Listen carefully to the examiner's question and answer it directly. Your reply here repeated the question back incorrectly and did not provide any information. Aim to give a clear topic sentence (yes/no plus brief detail) and up to two supporting details. Keep answers natural, short (no more than 5 sentences), and relevant.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for me when I was five. I rode it to the local park almost every day, which helped me learn balance quickly.

提案: Organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, additionally, for instance). Avoid hesitation sounds and repetition; use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'craze' instead of 'graze', brand names pronounced clearly). Be concise — 2–4 sentences are ideal.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many young people are obsessed with sport-style motorcycles like the Yamaha R-series because they look fast and modern. Additionally, motorcycles are practical for commuting in congested cities, which makes them a common choice for daily travel.

× Did you have a child when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student repeated 'child' instead of using the pronoun/noun referenced by the examiner. This is an incorrect use of words leading to wrong meaning. Suggestion: listen to the question and repeat the key noun accurately; use the same noun or an appropriate pronoun to avoid changing meaning.

× Yes in our country bikes are very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country.

The sentence word order is awkward. The standard English word order places the subject before the adverbial phrase 'in our country' for natural emphasis. Suggestion: move the subject and verb together ('bikes are') and place location/time phrases later or at the beginning with a comma.

× Even many people are having a big craze on A2 Wheelers umm like mostly they have a graze in this kind of yamaga bike yamaga recently Raj race version uh three bikes.

✓ Many people are very enthusiastic about A2 Wheelers, especially the Yamaha 'Raj Race' version of the three-wheel bikes.

The original uses nonstandard quantifiers and expressions ('a big craze on', 'have a graze') and repeats words. 'Many people' is sufficient; 'a big craze on' should be 'enthusiastic about' or 'crazy about'. Also brand/name spelling and structure were unclear. Suggestion: use appropriate quantifiers ('many', 'most') and standard collocations ('enthusiastic about', 'crazy about') and simplify the noun phrase.

× Those are all having a big graze.

✓ All of those are very popular.

Using 'having' with 'a big graze' is incorrect; 'graze' is the wrong word and 'having' creates an awkward progressive construction. Suggestion: replace with correct adjective/adverb constructions such as 'are popular' or 'are very popular'.

× Those are all uh matches the feel of uh track bikes.

✓ They all match the feel of track bikes.

Subject/pronoun agreement and verb form are incorrect: 'Those are all matches' mixes plural subject with singular verb. Use 'they' or 'those' with base verb 'match' for plural. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid unnecessary fillers.