Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, đúng ngữ pháp và có cấu trúc: bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + brief) rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và lỗi thì (ví dụ dùng "had" thay cho "have" khi nói về quá khứ). Nên dùng liên từ hợp lý nếu cần nối ý (e.g., "and", "so", "because"). Ví dụ cải thiện nên nêu nơi bạn đi xe, với ai, và một kỷ niệm ngắn để làm cụ thể câu trả lời.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, and I used to ride it every afternoon with my friends around the neighborhood. Riding helped me feel independent and improved my balance, so I remember it fondly.

提案: Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc và chính xác về ngữ pháp, dùng từ đúng (ví dụ "bikes" không "bias"), và nêu lý do cụ thể, kèm ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No/Or with degree), rồi nêu 1–2 lý do rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., "because", "for example"). Tránh những cụm từ không đúng như "go to riot" — có thể bạn muốn nói "ride in the park" hoặc "go to the park".

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many families buy bikes for their children to ride to school or around the park, and in cities people often use them to avoid traffic.

× When I was a child, I have a back and I can I can use to to write it with my friends and all my neighborhoods to improve myself.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike and I could use it to ride with my friends and the children in my neighborhood to have fun.

The sentence mixes past and present tense: 'When I was a child' requires past tense verbs (use 'had' not 'have'). 'Can' should be changed to 'could' to match past time. 'Back' is a typo for 'bike'. 'Use to to write' is incorrect; likely meant 'use it to ride'. 'All my neighborhoods' is wrong; use 'the children in my neighborhood' or 'all my neighbors'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently, fix vocabulary (bike, ride), remove duplicate words and correct noun phrase for neighborhood.

× Currently, I think bias is an is a popular transportation in my country because there are a lot of bike which can both to their children in their family and the children can use to go to riot in the park.

✓ Currently, I think bikes are a popular form of transportation in my country because there are a lot of bikes that parents can buy for their children and the children can use them to ride in the park.

Multiple issues: 'bias' is a typo for 'bikes'; noun number should be plural 'bikes are' rather than singular. 'Transportation' often needs 'a form of' or 'means of' when referring to bikes. 'There are a lot of bike' should be 'a lot of bikes' (plural). The relative clause 'which can both to their children in their family' is ungrammatical; 'that parents can buy for their children' is clearer. 'Use to go to riot' is incorrect and likely intended 'use them to ride'. Suggestion: use plural agreement, correct nouns, and simplify clauses for clarity.