Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question (e.g. "No, I didn’t have a bike as a child"). Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Provide one or two specific supporting details (why you didn’t have one and how you travelled) using linking words such as "because" or "so". Keep answers concise (max 3–4 short sentences) and avoid unrelated phrases like "If I have a bag."

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school because my family couldn’t afford a bike, and the journey took about an hour. Sometimes I went with neighbours, so the trip felt shorter.

提案: Work on pronunciation and sentence fluency, and correct word choice. Start with a direct topic sentence ("Yes, definitely"). Use appropriate vocabulary ("bikes" not "back"). Add one specific reason and an example, connected with linking words like "because" and "for example." Keep it natural and concise, avoid filler words like "umm."

例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride bikes to work during rush hour to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the simple past tense is required. 'Have' with 'haven't' is present perfect and does not match the time frame. Use 'didn't' to negate a past simple question: 'No, I didn't.' Suggestion: Use simple past for completed past events; replace 'haven't' with 'didn't'.

× I remember when I was a child, I needed you to go to school on work.

✓ I remember that when I was a child, I had to go to school for work.

The sentence has several problems: 'needed you to go' is incorrect in this context and 'on work' is wrong preposition/collocation. The intended meaning is obligation in the past, which is expressed with 'had to'. Also use 'that' or a comma after 'remember'. Suggestion: Use 'had to' for past obligation and use correct preposition/collocation 'for work' if that was intended, or simply 'to go to school' if referring to attending school.

× You know, there was been about one hour to go to my school.

✓ You know, it took about one hour to get to my school.

'There was been' is ungrammatical; a correct way to express duration required to travel is 'it took about one hour to get to my school.' Use past simple 'took' for a past duration. 'To go to my school' is awkward; 'to get to my school' is natural. Suggestion: Use 'it took + time' to describe how long travel required in the past.

× If I have a bag, they'll be really convenient.

✓ If I had a bag, it would be really convenient.

The sentence mixes conditional forms incorrectly. For a hypothetical present/future situation contrary to reality, use the second conditional: 'If I had... it would...' Also 'they'll' refers to plural but 'a bag' is singular; use 'it' instead. Ensure verb forms match conditional type. Suggestion: Use 'If I had a bag, it would be really convenient.' for unreal present conditions.

× Umm, I think back is very popular in my country 'cause you can see a lot of people travel by bike, especially on in their commit commute time.

✓ Umm, I think bikes are very popular in my country because you can see a lot of people travel by bike, especially during their commute time.

Multiple errors: 'back' is wrong word — should be 'bikes' (plural). Use 'because' instead of informal ''cause'. 'Travel by bike' is fine, but 'on in their commit commute time' has wrong prepositions and a misspelling 'commit' instead of 'commute'. Use 'during their commute' or 'at commute time'. Also ensure plural 'bikes' agrees with 'are'. Suggestion: Use the plural noun 'bikes', the conjunction 'because', the preposition 'during' and correct spelling 'commute'.