Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Keep your answer concise and correct grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary repetition and correct article and verb forms (e.g., “take the bus,” “on rainy days”).

例: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. Instead, I usually walked or took the bus to school, which was inconvenient on rainy days because I often got wet and my shoes would be muddy.

提案: Make your points clearer and more grammatical. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and provide a specific, coherent example. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., "fuel safe bike lanes", "on money may rouse") with correct expressions like "lack of safe bike lanes" and "in many areas cyclists must share the road with cars."

例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country. This is mainly because road conditions are poor and there is a lack of safe bike lanes, so people prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience and safety. For example, in many cities cyclists have to share busy roads with cars, which feels dangerous.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents never taught me how to ride.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents never taught me how to ride.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure; no change needed. It uses past simple consistently (didn't have, taught).

× I usually walk or to the bus to school, which was a bit inconvenient on rainy day.

✓ I usually walked or took the bus to school, which was a bit inconvenient on rainy days.

Errors: incorrect tense mix and wrong verb form and missing plural. The question asks about childhood (past), so use past habitual tense 'usually walked' and 'took' (past of take) not 'to the bus'. Also use plural 'rainy days'. Suggestion: keep past simple for habitual past actions and pluralize general time expressions.

× No, bikes are not very popular in my country.

✓ No, bikes are not very popular in my country.

This sentence is correct. It appropriately uses present simple to state a general fact; no change needed.

× This is mainly because road conditions are poor and they are fuel safe bike lanes.

✓ This is mainly because road conditions are poor and there are few safe bike lanes.

Errors: incorrect pronoun and wrong word choice. 'They are fuel safe bike lanes' is ungrammatical. Use 'there are' to state existence (There be issue, but here corrected as pronoun/structure) and 'few' or 'not many' to indicate scarcity: 'few safe bike lanes'. Also 'fuel' is wrong word—likely intended 'few'. Suggestion: use 'there are few safe bike lanes' to express lack of infrastructure.

× So people usually prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience and safety.

✓ So people usually prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience and safety.

This sentence is grammatically correct and appropriate; no change needed.

× For instance, on money may rouse cyclists have to share.

✓ For instance, in many more places cyclists have to share the road.

The original is confused and ungrammatical: 'on money may rouse' makes no sense. Likely intended meaning is that in many areas cyclists must share the road. Corrections: use 'in many places' or 'in many areas', and a clear clause 'cyclists have to share the road.' Suggestion: plan the sentence: start with 'For instance,' then state the example clearly: 'in many places cyclists have to share the road.'