Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the tense and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Make the sentence past simple for a past situation, avoid redundancy, and add a brief detail (e.g., what you liked about it or how you used it).

例: Yes, I had a purple bike when I was a child. I loved its bright color and rode it to school every day, which helped me feel independent and active.

提案: Provide a complete, natural sentence and add a specific reason or example. Use plural nouns and linking words to make the answer coherent (for example, use ‘because’ or ‘for example’). Keep it concise and avoid grammatical errors.

例: Yes, many people ride bikes in my country because cycling is an affordable and healthy way to travel. For example, in cities you often see commuters using bicycles to avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have a purple bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a purple bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had a purple bike'). Note: According to the provided list, this is a present tense issue (ID 6).

× Yes, a lot of people ride bike.

✓ Yes, a lot of people ride bikes.

The noun 'bike' should be plural after 'people' because 'people' refers to multiple individuals who each ride bikes. Use the plural form 'bikes'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after plural subjects or expressions indicating many (e.g., 'people ride bikes'). Note: According to the provided list, this is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).