Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời nên ở thì quá khứ (did/had), dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh ngắn quá và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ cụ thể về chiếc xe, thời gian và cảm xúc sẽ giúp câu tự nhiên hơn. Sử dụng liên từ nếu cần mở rộng câu.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels that my parents bought me when I was six, and I used it almost every day to visit friends and explore my neighborhood.

提案: Cải thiện: Sửa ngữ pháp và phát âm (bikes, country), tránh lặp từ và cấu trúc sai (it is because them). Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 2–3 lý do cụ thể với liên từ (for example, because, therefore). Giữ tối đa 5 câu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như convenient, affordable, eco-friendly, commute.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are convenient and affordable. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or school, especially in crowded cities. Also, cycling is eco-friendly and helps people save money on transport.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple. The student's reply should use past tense as well. 'Have' is present tense; 'did' is the appropriate past simple short answer. Suggestion: answer past simple questions with past simple forms (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't').

× Yes, I think bites are popular in my countries because it is because them are convenient and cheap.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are convenient and cheap.

Multiple issues here relate to word choice and agreement. 'Bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes'. 'Countries' should be singular 'country' when referring to the speaker's own country. 'It is because them are' is ungrammatical: use the pronoun 'they' to refer to plural 'bikes' and the verb 'are' for plural. Remove the redundant 'it is because'. Suggestion: use correct spelling, singular/plural agreement, and the appropriate pronoun: 'bikes... my country... they are convenient and cheap.'

× Children can use them to go to school or just to use them can order to.

✓ Children can use them to go to school or simply to get around.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an ungrammatical phrase 'to use them can order to.' Use a concise verb phrase 'to get around' (meaning to travel locally) or 'to go out' for general use. Also avoid repeating 'use them' unnecessarily. Suggestion: rephrase awkward verb + infinitive constructions into natural forms like 'to go to school or to get around.'