Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题，注意时态和语法。可以用一到两句说明情况，再补充简短原因或感受。避免重复词语，句子不应过长。示例应包含正确的过去时和更自然的表达。

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought cycling was unsafe in our neighborhood, so they didn't allow me to have one.

提案: 回答要明确且语法正确，避免口头语（like）和不相关的短语（listening to Macau）。先给出直接观点，再用一两句具体原因或比较支持你的看法，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Not really. In Macau, most people prefer cars or public transport because distances are short and the roads are crowded, so cycling isn't very common.

× Oh my parents didn't let me to buy a bike so I don't have a bike when I was child.

✓ Oh, my parents didn't let me buy a bike, so I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

错误类型：动词后接 -ing 形式/不定式使用不当。解释：动词 "let" 后面应直接接动词原形（bare infinitive），而不是加 "to"。此外，句子时态不一致：前半句是过去时（didn't let），后半句应也用过去时（didn't have），并补全冠词和冠词位置（a child 改为 a child 并加上介词 when I was a child）。建议：记住像 let/make/see/hear 等使役动词后接動詞原形；保持句子中时态一致，并注意在“a child”前加不定冠词。

× I I'm listening to Macau now, I think like it's not popular in my country.

✓ I'm living in Macau now. I think bikes aren't very popular in my country.

错误类型：句子结构和用词错误。解释：原句中“I I'm listening to Macau now”不通顺，likely 想表达“我现在住在/生活在澳门”，应使用 be + living/住。"listening to Macau" 是错误搭配。其次，“I think like” 是口语填充词，正式句子不需使用；并且“it's not popular in my country” 的指代不清，最好明确主语为 "bikes"。时态方面，描述现在的状况用现在进行时或一般现在时都可，这里用 "I'm living" 与 "aren't" 更自然。建议：用正确的动词表达居住（live/I'm living），避免口语填充词 like，在提到事物时明确主语（bikes）。