Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse n'était pas réellement une réponse à la question — vous avez répété la question. Répondez directement par une phrase d'ouverture claire (oui/non) puis ajoutez une ou deux phrases de détails. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour la cohérence (par exemple, "yes, I did" followed by "because" or "so"). Donnez des détails spécifiques comme l'âge, le type de vélo, ou un souvenir pour enrichir la réponse.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven; it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. Because my parents taught me in the park, I remember learning to balance on a sunny afternoon.

提案: Votre réponse répond à la question mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et manque de précisions. Corrigez la grammaire (par exemple, "many people use them") et développez avec des détails concrets: qui les utilise, où, et pourquoi. Utilisez un lien logique pour ajouter un exemple ou une raison (par exemple, "because" ou "for example").

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many students and office workers cycle to work and school in the mornings to avoid traffic, and cities have increasingly built bike lanes.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. There are many people use it.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. There are many people who use them.

The original sentence uses 'There are many people use it', which incorrectly combines a 'there be' construction with a bare verb. According to 'There be' rules (ID 3) and relative clause structure, a relative pronoun 'who' is required before the verb: 'people who use'. Also 'bikes' is plural, so the object pronoun must be plural: 'them' instead of 'it'. Suggestion: insert the relative pronoun 'who' and change 'it' to 'them' to match plural antecedent, yielding 'There are many people who use them.'