Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答没有回答考官的问题，且时态和人称使用错误。回答应直接说明过去是否拥有自行车，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，例如什么时候拥有、谁给的或骑车的频率。注意时态要用过去式，并用连接词（例如 "because", "so", "however"）使句子连贯。回答不要超过5句。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old because my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, which helped me become more confident and independent.

× Do you have bike when you are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

问题出在时态和冠词上。考官问的是过去是否拥有自行车，应该用一般过去时（Did you have... / when you were...），而学生使用了现在时（Do you have... / are you...），时态不匹配。另一个问题是缺少不定冠词“a”，因为“bike”是可数名词单数，正确用法是“a bike”。改进建议：遇到描述过去的情形时使用过去时态；注意可数名词单数前需要加不定冠词（a/an）。