Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and direct but a bit short and repetitive (you repeat 'when I was a child'). To improve, give one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it, or a short memory) and use a linking phrase to connect ideas. Keep responses natural and within five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because the streets were quiet, I quickly learned to balance and gained a lot of confidence, which made cycling one of my favorite childhood activities.

提案: The answer is direct but too brief and contains grammatical issues (subject-verb agreement and vague wording). Improve by using correct grammar, adding a reason or example, and a linking word to make the response coherent. Aim for one topic sentence plus one supporting detail.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared-bike schemes, so cycling has become a convenient and affordable option for daily travel.

× Yes, it's popular in our country.

✓ Yes, they're popular in our country.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun and verb must match plurality. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' (singular). Use 'they're' (they are) to agree with the plural noun 'bikes'. Suggestion: identify the noun number (singular/plural) and choose matching pronouns and verb forms (they + are for plural).