Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Good direct response and clear detail. To improve, make your answer slightly more natural and concise by combining information into one or two sentences and use a linking word to show the relationship between the facts. Also avoid repeating words (e.g., “I had my bike” twice).

例: Yes, I had a bike as a gift when I was four, and I used it to cycle around my neighbourhood every afternoon.

提案: The idea is fine but the sentence has grammar and clarity issues. Improve by using correct grammar (subject and verb agreement), clearer phrasing, and a linking word to contrast popularity with actual usage. Add a specific example or reason to support the statement.

例: Yes, bicycles are popular in my country; however, relatively few people use them regularly because there are not enough dedicated bike lanes, so many people prefer cars or public transport for safety reasons.

× Yes, bikes are very popular, but not many people ride the bike because doesn't have a bike a bike path.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular, but not many people ride bikes because there aren't many bike paths.

The original sentence misused the 'there be' construction and article usage. 'doesn't have a bike a bike path' is ungrammatical. Use 'there aren't' to state the nonexistence of bike paths. Also use the plural 'bikes' and 'bike paths' to match the general statement. Suggestion: use 'there is/are' plus correct noun number, and avoid repeating words (remove the extra 'a bike').