Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a slightly longer, natural response that directly answers then adds one specific detail or memory. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid repetition. Use a linking word if you add another sentence.

例: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about eight. It had a small basket and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon, which helped me become more confident on the road.

提案: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence then two specific supporting reasons. Remove filler words (umm) and use linking words (for example, also) for coherence. Add one concrete example or comparison to make it more specific.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people commute to work or school by bicycle because it is cheaper and faster in busy cities; additionally, you can often see families cycling together in parks on weekends.

× I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The past tense 'had' matches the time frame 'when I was a child.' No errors from the provided grammar problem list apply.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because people would cycle to work and school umm on bikes and you can usually see bikes in parks and country parks umm.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because people often cycle to work and school, and you can usually see bikes in parks and country parks.

The original sentence uses 'would cycle' which implies a conditional or repeated past action; for a general present-time statement, use the simple present 'often cycle.' This fits the present-time context introduced by 'I think.' Remove filler words 'umm' for clarity and add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: use adverbs of frequency (often, usually) and simple present for habitual actions.

× Even nowadays people are cycling on roads.

✓ Even nowadays, people cycle on the roads.

The progressive 'are cycling' suggests action happening right now; for a general trend 'nowadays' the simple present 'cycle' is more appropriate. Also add a comma after 'Even nowadays' for clarity and include the article 'the' before 'roads' if referring to roads in general. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual or general statements and punctuate introductory adverbials with a comma.