Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, avoid unnecessary repetition, and stay within 1–5 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used it every day to ride to the park. Because I practiced a lot, I became confident riding on busy paths and even entered a local kids’ race once.

提案: You answered the question but the response has grammar errors, hesitations, redundancy and unclear phrases. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb tense, link ideas (for example, because/so/therefore), and give a specific example or statistic. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and double negatives.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many young people cannot obtain a motorcycle license. As a result, students often cycle to school and college, especially in urban areas where cycling is faster and cheaper than taking public transport.

× 'Yes, I think it was popular in my country because you know, most of the underage people can't don't have the license to ride a motorcycle.'

✓ 'Yes, I think they are popular in my country because most underage people do not have a license to ride a motorcycle.'

'was popular' disagrees with the general present-time reference; the subject 'bikes' is plural so use 'they are popular'. 'can't don't have' is a double negative and ungrammatical; use 'do not have' or 'can't have' but not both. Also 'underage people' is better as 'most underage people' without 'the'. Suggestion: use present simple for general statements and ensure verbs agree with plural subjects.'

× 'So they do prefer bikes riding to their schools, colleges and also this time and also.'

✓ 'So they prefer riding bikes to their schools and colleges.'

'prefer' is followed by a gerund ('riding') or an infinitive, not 'bikes riding'. The preposition 'to' correctly indicates direction (to their schools), but 'to their schools, colleges and also this time and also' is redundant and ungrammatical. Remove repeated 'also' and the phrase 'this time' which is unclear. Suggestion: use 'prefer riding bikes to school and college' or 'prefer to ride bikes to their schools and colleges.'