Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your reply does not answer the question. For Part 1 you must respond directly with a brief, relevant statement (1–3 sentences) and optionally one supporting detail. Keep it natural and on-topic. Use a topic sentence that answers the question, then add a specific detail (when, where, or why). Use linking words if you add more than one idea.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six and used it to visit friends in my neighborhood, which helped me become more independent.

提案: The answer is too short and not explanatory. Provide a clear opinion in one sentence, then add a specific reason or example using a linking word (for example, because, so, or therefore). Keep responses natural and avoid single-word replies.

例: Yes, bikes are still popular in China because many people use them for short trips in cities. For example, shared bike services and bike lanes have made cycling a convenient and affordable choice for commuting.

× I want to talk English with you.

✓ I want to speak English with you.

The verb 'talk' is typically followed by the preposition 'to' and an object (talk to someone) or a direct object describing what is talked about (talk about something). When referring to the ability or activity of using a language, English uses 'speak English' or 'talk in English'. The student’s sentence incorrectly combines 'talk' with the direct object 'English' without 'to' or 'in'. Use 'speak English' for clarity and correctness; alternatively, 'talk to you in English' is also correct. Suggestion: say 'I want to speak English with you' or 'I want to talk to you in English.'

× China.

✓ Yes, in China bikes are very popular.

The single-word reply 'China.' is not a complete sentence and does not directly answer the examiner’s question. This is a sentence structure error (no verb, no full idea). The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' so the student should provide a full sentence matching the question’s tense and structure, for example: 'Yes, in China bikes are very popular.' This provides a clear subject, verb and complement. Suggestion: Give a full sentence that answers the question, e.g. 'Yes, bikes are very popular in China.'.