Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and informative by starting with a concise topic sentence and adding one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking phrase if you add extra information. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I remember riding it around our neighborhood every weekend. For example, my father taught me to ride in the park, and I soon used it to visit friends nearby.

提案: Make the answer more fluent and natural by using a clear topic sentence, a linking word, and a specific example or comparison. Correct small grammatical issues (e.g., singular/plural agreement and word order).

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in the Philippines. In particular, many people use them because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, and in some cities bicycles are more practical than cars during traffic jams.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The auxiliary 'did' is unnecessary in a positive past simple statement. Using 'did have' is grammatically acceptable but sounds redundant; the natural form is 'I had.' Use the simple past 'had' to match the question's tense and keep the sentence concise. ID:5

× Yes, in our country it is very popular to use bikes, especially in the Philippines because it's a very low cost mode of transportation.

✓ Yes, in our country using bikes is very popular, especially in the Philippines, because they are a very low-cost mode of transportation.

The original mixes singular and plural references and has awkward word order. 'It is very popular to use bikes' is grammatically possible but unnatural; rephrasing to 'using bikes is very popular' is clearer. 'A very low cost mode' conflicts with plural 'bikes'; use 'they are a very low-cost mode' or 'a very low-cost mode' with singular 'biking' or 'cycling.' Also hyphenate 'low-cost' as a compound adjective. Include commas for clarity. ID:1