Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a brief direct answer then add a short reason or a memory to make the response more natural and engaging. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas and keep the answer within 3–4 sentences. Avoid repeating words (e.g., don’t restate “bike” too often) and try to include a specific detail (age, family situation, or alternative transport).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbour’s bike from about age nine, and I used it to ride to school on weekends.

提案: Start with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, ‘because’ and ‘for instance’) and a concise example or statistic if possible. Correct basic grammar (use plural agreement: “people use”) and vary vocabulary (e.g., ‘commute’, ‘deliveries’, ‘short trips’). Keep it to 3–4 sentences for naturalness.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or make deliveries in busy city centres, and others rely on them for shopping or visiting nearby friends.

× People uses bikes in their daily life and for their work and to cover a short distance.

✓ People use bikes in their daily life and for their work and to cover short distances.

The verb must agree with the plural subject 'People'; use 'use' not 'uses'. Also 'a short distance' is better pluralized as 'short distances' when speaking generally. Suggestion: match verb form to subject number and use plural noun for general frequency contexts (e.g., 'short distances').

× People uses bikes in their daily life and for their work and to cover a short distance.

✓ People use bikes in their daily life and for their work and to cover short distances.

When referring to people generally, use plural forms: 'People' (plural) requires 'use' and general habits often take plural 'short distances' instead of 'a short distance'. Suggestion: ensure nouns match the general/plural sense by using plural forms for repeated or habitual actions.