Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not address the question. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers (Yes/No) and add 1–2 specific supporting details (age, how often you used it, memories) using a linking word. Keep responses natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven and rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, which helped me become more independent.

提案: Your answer is short and partly relevant but could be expanded with specific supporting details and linking words. Start with a clear opinion, then give reasons or examples (who uses bikes, for what purposes, and any trends), using linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular because many people use them for short commutes and leisure. For example, in my city lots of students and office workers cycle to avoid traffic, and there are new bike lanes being built to encourage more people to ride.

× Yes, hello.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student's response 'Yes, hello.' is inappropriate to the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' It lacks a clear reference to the question and uses 'hello' which is a greeting, not an answer. This is an incorrect use/omission of the pronoun and structure for answering a yes/no past question. Correcting to 'Yes, I did.' supplies the subject pronoun 'I' and the auxiliary 'did' required for a short answer in the past tense. Suggestion: Use short answers that include the appropriate pronoun and auxiliary for past questions (e.g., 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.').

× Of course they are, and I do actually have one.

✓ Of course they are popular, and I actually have one.

The original sentence 'Of course they are, and I do actually have one.' is awkward because the clause 'Of course they are' lacks an explicit complement; the listener must infer 'popular'. Also the insertion of 'do' in 'I do actually have one' is unnecessary and sounds emphatic in spoken English; simpler 'I actually have one' fits the present-tense question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Maintain present tense and clarity by stating 'Of course they are popular, and I actually have one.' Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in affirmative present-tense statements unless adding emphasis; include clear complements for 'be' verbs.