Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and add one specific supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences.

例: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about eight. For example, I used to ride it to the park every afternoon with my friends, which helped me learn to balance and gain confidence.

提案: Answer directly, correct word order and tense, and provide a specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., "because", "for instance"). Be more precise and avoid awkward phrasing like "every day almost." Limit to two or three sentences max.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular because many people use them for short commutes. For instance, in my city many residents cycle to work or school to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, I have, back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did, back when I was a child.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple. The student used 'have' (present) with 'Yes, I have', which is incorrect for past reference. Use the past simple 'did' to match the tense: 'Yes, I did.' Suggestions: use past simple auxiliaries ('did') or past tense verbs ('I had') for past-time questions.

× Yes, I think so, because many people have a bike and they will ride the bike every day almost.

✓ Yes, I think so, because many people have a bike and they ride bikes almost every day.

The examiner asked a general present-time question ('Do you think bikes are popular...'). The phrase 'they will ride the bike every day almost' mixes future 'will' and awkward word order 'every day almost'. For habitual present actions, use present simple: 'they ride bikes almost every day.' Also pluralize 'bike' to 'bikes' to agree with 'many people' (plural) and place adverb 'almost' before 'every day' or better after: 'almost every day.' Suggestions: use present simple for habitual actions, match plural forms, and place adverbs in natural positions.