Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Mejorar la gramática y la fluidez. Debes usar tiempo pasado consistente (por ejemplo, 'I had a bike') y elaborar brevemente con un detalle específico para hacer la respuesta más natural y completa. Evita frases fragmentadas y corrige la concordancia (por ejemplo, 'you' → 'I').

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon, and I remember practicing tricks in the park until sunset.

提案: Corregir la gramática y ofrecer razones claras con conectores. Usa estructuras completas y vocabulario relevante (por ejemplo, 'popular' and 'prefer'). Añade un conector como 'because' seguido de una razón específica y evita traducciones literales incorrectas ('make to the car').

例: Not really. I think bicycles are not very popular because most people prefer to drive cars for convenience and speed, especially for commuting to work. As a result, cycling is more common among young people and hobbyists.

× Yes, I have a bike. When you're a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when you're a child' and uses contraction 'you're' which is inappropriate. Use past tense 'had' and 'was' to match the past-time context. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for both verbs when talking about childhood: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× No, I think because the people usually make to the car.

✓ No. I think people usually prefer cars.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and word choice: 'think because' is disfluent and 'make to the car' is not a correct verb phrase. The intended meaning is likely that people choose or prefer cars, so use 'prefer cars' and remove the unnecessary 'because'. Also 'the people' is unnatural in this context; use 'people' without the article. Suggestion: say 'No. I think people usually prefer cars.'