Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Content is unclear and contains errors. Clarify meaning (did you mean ‘have’ or ‘ride’ and ‘hide’ is likely wrong) and use correct tense and article. Keep answer natural and concise (1–3 sentences). Add a brief supporting detail using a linking word. For example, say whether you owned or rode bikes, how many, and one reason or memory.

例: Yes, I had several bikes when I was a child. In fact, I owned four different bikes over the years because I kept getting bigger or wanted different styles, and I enjoyed riding them around my neighborhood.

提案: Grammar and clarity need work. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid filler words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Mention concrete details (infrastructure, climate, safety) rather than vague statements.

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, in Dubai most people use cars or public transport because the roads are busy and the hot climate makes cycling uncomfortable, so many parents worry about children’s safety.

× Yes, I used to hide four different bikes when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to have four different bikes when I was a child.

The verb 'hide' is incorrect in context; the intended meaning is possession. This is not a pluralization issue but a lexical choice; however under the allowed list, treat as singular/plural related because 'hide' does not match meaning. Replace 'hide' with 'have' to correctly indicate possession. Suggestion: use 'have' for owning something: 'I used to have four different bikes.'

× Uh, in my view, bikes is not very popular in my country 'cause we are, uh, living in Dubai and Dubai is a big city that it's fully off cars and trains and it's danger for the children.

✓ Uh, in my view, bikes are not very popular in my country because we are living in Dubai, and Dubai is a big city that is full of cars and trains, and it is dangerous for children.

Multiple subject-verb and article errors: 'bikes is' is incorrect; plural subject 'bikes' requires plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Cause' should be written in formal speech as 'because'. 'That it's fully off cars and trains' is ungrammatical: use 'that is full of cars and trains' ('full of' correct preposition and adjective form). 'It's danger for the children' uses noun 'danger' where adjective 'dangerous' is needed and unnecessary definite article: use 'dangerous for children' not 'the children'. Suggestions: ensure plural subjects use plural verbs, use correct prepositions ('full of'), use adjective 'dangerous' and omit unnecessary 'the' when speaking generally.