Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and concise, but too brief. Give a short topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (reason, brief memory or contrast) using linking words to make it more natural and informative. Keep it under five sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived in a busy city and we didn’t have space to store a bike. However, I sometimes borrowed a neighbour’s bike at weekends.

提案: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammar, word choice and clarity problems. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Use correct noun forms and verb tenses, and avoid unnecessary words. Keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are often faster than cars in heavy traffic. For example, commuters frequently use bikes to get to work during rush hour, and many cities have dedicated bike lanes which makes cycling convenient.

× Yes, bike is popular our country because they we use it when it was a traffic.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because we use them when there is traffic.

Multiple errors match the Article errors category and others in the provided list; per instructions only correct those that meet the list. The original sentence omits the plural marker for 'bike' and the preposition 'in' before 'our country', uses an incorrect subject 'they we' and wrong pronoun 'it' for plural, and an incorrect clause 'when it was a traffic'. The corrected sentence adjusts number (bikes), adds the preposition 'in', uses the correct subject 'we' and plural object 'them', and uses the verb 'is' with the noun 'traffic' to form 'when there is traffic'. Suggestions: use plural form for general statements about a category (bikes), include needed prepositions ('in my country'), match pronouns in number with their antecedents ('them' for bikes), and use 'there is/are' to state existence with uncountable nouns like 'traffic'.