Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm lặp từ và thiếu liên kết, nội dung hơi lủng củng. Cần sửa thì hiện tại/ quá khứ (a lot of bikes → many bikes), dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn (My parents bought me bikes), tránh lặp từ (as a as a) và giới hạn độ dài (tối đa 3–4 câu). Thêm một câu cụ thể mô tả một kỷ niệm hoặc loại xe để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Ví dụ cụ thể: ‘I remember one red bicycle I loved because…’

例: Yes, I had several bikes when I was a child. My parents bought me a new one for my birthday every few years, and I especially remember a small red bike with training wheels that I rode around the neighborhood. Those bikes gave me a lot of freedom and fun during my childhood.

提案: Câu trả lời ngắn, nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng (umm), lỗi ngữ pháp (people thinks → people think; is more cheaper → is cheaper; get a motorbike → owning a motorbike), và thiếu cụ thể. Cần dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (because, especially), mô tả cụ thể hơn (economic reasons, traffic, culture) và tránh nói lặp. Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng, thêm ví dụ cụ thể nơi chốn hoặc số liệu nếu có.

例: Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer them because they are inexpensive to buy and run, and they are convenient for short trips, especially in rural areas where roads are narrow. For example, farmers often use bicycles to travel to the market or to carry small goods.

× I used to have a lot of bike when I was child.

✓ I used to have a lot of bikes when I was a child.

'Bike' should be plural ('bikes') because 'a lot of' refers to more than one. Also add the article 'a' before 'child' to say 'a child'.

× My parents did buy for me a lot of bikes as a as a gift for my birthday or some special occasion.

✓ My parents bought me a lot of bikes as gifts for my birthday or other special occasions.

Use past simple 'bought' instead of 'did buy' for a natural statement. Do not use 'buy for me'—English places the object directly after the verb: 'bought me'. 'A lot of bikes' implies multiple gifts, so use the plural 'gifts'. Remove the duplicated 'as a'. Use 'other special occasions' for generality.

× Bikes are really popular in my country because umm a lot of people thinks that UMM ride a bike.

✓ Bikes are really popular in my country because a lot of people think that they can ride a bike.

Subject 'a lot of people' is plural, so the verb must be 'think' (not 'thinks'). Also provide a clear subject for 'ride a bike'—'they can ride a bike' or simply 'they ride bikes'.

× UMM is more cheaper than get a motorbike or cars, especially in a rural areas.

✓ It is cheaper than getting a motorbike or a car, especially in rural areas.

Do not use 'more' with comparative 'cheaper'—use 'cheaper' alone. Use gerund 'getting' after 'than' when comparing actions. Use singular 'a car' when speaking generally, or plural 'cars' without article. 'In rural areas' does not need the article 'a'. Also replace vague 'UMM' with 'It' referring to bikes.