Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the question instead of answering. Give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (age, how often you used it, or a short memory). Keep answers natural and no more than 5 sentences. Use linking words like "when" or "and" to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and rode it to visit my friend every afternoon. Because the roads near our house were quiet, I felt confident practicing new tricks and riding longer distances.

提案: Your answer is brief and contains a grammar mistake and unclear phrase "single bike." Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details (who uses bikes, where, or why). Use linking words such as "because" or "for example" and choose correct vocabulary like "bicycles" or "motorbikes."

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For example, students and delivery workers often ride bikes in cities since they are cheap and easy to park.

× Yes, I single bike is popular in my country.

✓ Yes, single bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence mixes singular and plural and has an incorrect subject. 'I single bike' is ungrammatical. The examiner asked about bikes in general, so use the plural noun 'bikes' and plural verb 'are'. Place the adjective 'single' before 'bikes' if you mean bikes for single riders, or omit it if unnecessary. Suggestion: decide whether you mean 'single bikes' or simply 'bikes', and ensure subject and verb agree: 'bikes are'.